Review Detail of Bob_The_Lard_God in The Demonic Emperor

He deleted this comment so now I can put it on his front page!

You honestly should stop projecting yourself onto the main character. Also, nowhere does it mention that Klein intends to betray humans, or lead the demons to invade the human kingdom. I don't know where you are drawing those conclusions from, but it feels like you are straight up making stuff up here right now. It's funny how some people always think in terms of black and white. Oh, he's working with the demons now, HE MUST BE BETRAYING THE HUMANS! Never mind that he hasn't actually done anything of the sort, he has actually helped a few humans here and there, and actively kept the demons from attacking civilians. Also, he obviously couldn't have won against her (she agreed to be a hostage, but she certainly didn't agree to getting killed) because she's a Divine General, but let's pretend that he can somehow "melt" her. Wait, what? This is further evidence that you didn't actually read the story because Klein is an ice mage, not a fire mage. Congratulations for projecting yourself onto the main character. Here, your thunderous applause.

Another case of show don't tell. It doesn't have to explicitly mention that he's going to betray the humans for readers to assume such, especially coupled with the fact that he has no ties to humans other than his race which has been changed early in the series. In chapter 8 pg 5 he pretty much says that the only reason he had keeping him from betraying the humans is that he used to be one. Also in chapter ten he was straight up saying that he would ´contribute to the war effort´ so there's your mention. He was able to defeat one of the Divine Generals who legit was able to negate magic, It isn't much of a stretch to say that he's pretty much the number one at his given element so it wasn't ´obvious´. Also why is she surrendering when it was possible to escape pretty reliably after taking out Klein, throwing up a wall, and having her squad of black mages throw out suppression fire. Though admittedly I forgot the paragraph saying he was inept in all magic that's not ice magic so I thought it was just specialization and he could whip out other magic in a bad situation. Also I ¨totally¨ didn't read the story even though I pretty much vandalized the comment section of a good amount of chapters. Now, give me thunderous applause, I could tell you didn't mean the last one

And you assumed I was the one who deleted it? Why would I delete it after replying to you? Maybe you're the one who deleted it because you posted the same comment twice (and I replied to the first one on Inkstone)? But no, let's just attack the author without finding out the facts first. Does it feel good? Do you feel powerful throwing around false accusations and attacking other people? This is yet another case of you jumping into conclusions and assuming incorrectly.

Yeah, obviously I was being sarcastic. Do you want a prize for realizing that? I don't know if you're trying to be dense, but I was implying that you've been just deliberately misreading and glossing over important details of my story, which renders most of your criticism...invalid. As for the vampire lord, I specifically said that he had already been weakened by the Hero Herman. Whereas, I don't know, Silvia didn't fight Herman? Yeah, she could have done what you suggested, but she will still take heavy losses because the spells wouldn't be enough to keep the Hero back. And there you go. He explicitly said that he has no intentions to betray the humans. So why are you going around assuming that he will? And he obviously said that he will contribute to the war effort because he was trying to use the demons. What else is he supposed to tell them, "I'm only making use of you guys and then I'm running away after this battle!" You tell me to show, not tell, and I have shown throughout the entire story that he has no intentions of attacking humans uninvolved in his revenge. He could have killed the platoon left behind to occupy the castle, but he didn't. He could have killed all the servants in Herman and Irene's palace, but he didn't. He could have not bothered to save Stella, but he did. He could have let the demons kill Stella, but he didn't. So why do you insist that he plans to betray humans just because he decides to manipulate the demonic legion into helping him attack a single garrison? Again, I have shown that he is not above lying and manipulating to get to his goals (he lied to the human occupation force in the castle, he relied on subterfuge to infiltrate Herman and Irene's household). It's not that I didn't show, it's you who completely overlooked what has been shown so far.