I LOVE IT!!! Your style of writing is awesome, and the action scenes are played out perfectly! The MC isn't some Deus Ex Machina and actually gets character development, along with all the other major players. And seriously man, you tug on my heartstrings like you're playing a guitar. I just finished the part where Hopi died, and I tell you that I cried like a baby. Thank you for your awesome work, and I would love to read more from you!!
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