The story is good and I don't mind him not knowing the pokemon world since in the pokemon world you don't really need to know the plot because let be honest it is not as important as in other worlds like HP or Naruto. If he learns about pokemon and doesn't fucking act stupid then he be a good MC. BUT PLEASE FUCKING EVOLVE PIKACHU THE OTHER REVIEW TALKS ABOUT CLICHES BUT HE/SHE FUCKING FORGETS TO MENTION FUCKING PIKACHU. Ps: I don't hate PIKACHU in the anime but i just don't like him in fanfiction because a lot of author don't fucking evolve him into RAICHU
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