Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Hangry Potter

Evaluation: Subpar (Could've been better if not for the tons of gramm errors). WQ: Multiple gramm errors which is worst than an MTL version without any improvement whatsover. The premise as well as the thought process put into this FF is quite impeccable and refreshing. 3/5 SD: With an average to fast pace of development which is a plus as it wouldn't bore the readers. MCs prerogative was quite amusing as well as the story development as it portray the dark side of HPVerse & a unique way on how to counter plot holes which is a plus the only con is the translation & numerous grammatical errors. 4/5 CD: MCs portrayal as a transmigrator was quite developed as he uses his foreknowledge and out of the box strats' to overcome the schemes and plots of HP-verse. MC doesn't have any gold finger which is a plus and his persona is quite commendable 'chaotic-neutral' which is apt for HPVerse. 4/5 US: Completed story which lacks a bit of a detail. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san focuses more on out of the box strats that is more inclined in muggle knowledge and reasoning. No other branches of magic are discussed nor developed (e.g. ritual, elemental, ruinic, ancient or etc). 2/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD