Review Detail of Tom_Sky in Hangry Potter

Please accept my gratitude. You supported a beginner author. I'm not happy with my first Hungry Potter story. You know I've published a ready-made, fully written novel. I've read the comments and corrected some places. I understand that the opinion of any of my 353 readers has value. Sometimes your wishes are not hard to fulfill. It was not difficult for me to change some episodes in the novel. In the story of Hungry Potter, I learned my degree of depravity. It was hard for me to write a story about a scoundrel who fought fiercely in a cruel world. I love Tarantino. I like to read about evil heroes. I'm well aware of the value of this direction. Everyone loves cats and antiheroes. Now I want to write a long story. I cannot humiliate and destroy the models of great authors. The villains will be smart, cunning, and cute. Not hangry like maddog's. There will be no kind, naive, ordinary heroes. Thank you for your kindness, I leave this page :)