As someone from America, I think your English is pretty good. 👌 The story is really good, thought a litter shorter than others. I think you did a great job on this and I hope you write lots more in the future! 😊 I have read many magnificent novels, and can say this with sertinty, this AND you have so much potential. This could easily become one of the great works out there. ❤️
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LIKEredblue:Thanks so much 😅😅 I sux at english but try my best hope you enjoy for my future content.