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Review Detail of Fadhli in The Wild Man of Pokemon

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Fadhli
FadhliLv64yrFadhli

A good example of a well written story. It shows the ability of the MC to pick himself up and adapt to the situation. The Pokemon interaction seems ridiculous, for example (neurons). Maybe the author could just said that the MC's brain is overloading or something. There is still some grammatical errors here and there, but it ensures the story is readable. I hope the author will continue to improve in his writing.

The Wild Man of Pokemon

TheQuibbler20

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TheQuibbler20
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Thanks for the criticism. I did fix the neuron part and I will correct grammar as I go along. I do appreciate peoples reviews and strive to do better as a writer.