A good example of a well written story. It shows the ability of the MC to pick himself up and adapt to the situation. The Pokemon interaction seems ridiculous, for example (neurons). Maybe the author could just said that the MC's brain is overloading or something. There is still some grammatical errors here and there, but it ensures the story is readable. I hope the author will continue to improve in his writing.
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