Review Detail of Kamatis in Axed

Yow, your story was good, gonna tell you that... The vocabulary and use of words are good and definitely worth the praise... But what enchants me the most is the huge world... Yes, the terrific world building slowly built as the chapters advance... (One of the reasons I love the Fantasy genre but hates making one myself... Yes, world-building... my weak point...) Anyways, the world building is great and gonna expect more chapters to come... Keep up the good work, author