Well, love the story! It started off nicely. It jumped right into the action. Though I think you should make the hunt more exciting, like more action(?) Anyway, writing wise, it’s already good just some minor mistakes. Love the hunter concept and how the MC is actually fighting from the enemy side. That’s new! Usually people would just make the MC more powerful or give her some special transformation. That’s why I think this story is unique on its own. Do update more! Good luck author 😁
Erza18
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