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Review Detail of pineapplemelon in Mark of the destiny

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pineapplemelon
pineapplemelonLv43yrpineapplemelon

*A picky critic here* Found this book a lot hilarios before the love confession of the leads.. After confession it was a abrupt divergence to other characters/couples. Wanted to see the budding love & work chemistry between leads with their dorky akwardness! Rather they became quite boring characters just introduced wen needed! As a person who likes to root for one couple/leads at a time... Having to remembr the stories of three couples is too draining! Ofcourse the side characters can always have happy endings.. But in the middle of the plot of the leads, stealing their focus story? Just nahhh!! Also realistic topics r quite cool.. Can always do it with quirky comebacks or a bit fun element in between.. Without it the topics r quite depressing just informative like newspapers!! So with heavy heart dropping it from my library!

Mark of the destiny

dream_ash

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dream_ash
dream_ashAuthordream_ash

I'm sorry you feel that way. Thankyou for the constructive review, I appreciate you let me know your thoughts. 🙂

pineapplemelon
pineapplemelonLv4pineapplemelon

I hardly find authors who appreciate and welcome harsh critics regarding their book.. Authors usually delete/block the review n forget it.. This attitude of yours is commendable!! 🌸