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j_c77
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the 1st chapter was very good but everything was ruined in the 3rd chapter. - The MC indirectly helps the bad guys because of their devil bias and causes Asia's death. - Much drama and misunderstandings - You can see the hatred directed at Rias and her nobility which is irrational because despite their personality problems they are not bad people. - Thousands of years of training and results in a mcdevil and ignorant, ignorance that caused the disaster in chapter 3 ... Just because he sensed the existence of demons he automatically thought they were bad. After those thousands of years of being on the throne of heroes, the MC should already know that the church and gods can be worse than demons.

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j_c77
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Correction: [Thousands of years of training and study results in a weak and ignorant mc, ignorance that caused the disaster in chapter 3] Sorry for the mistakes, this was written with google translator

HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON
HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMONLv5HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON

Not defending the author but there is some misunderstanding in your comment. The problem one is basically he is at the wrong time and wrong place. Well some drama and misunderstanding is actually to spice up the stories...like without aspect like that the stories is bland. About perception about Rias... hmm she is not evil but her flaw is also there which although expressed to direct and a bit exaggerated, but still hit the spot. We are talking about the girl who know about each of her peerage problem yet choose to 'let time heal the wounds' even in original works, and the girl who knows her own predicament and choose to waste times for years...Years. not evil but yeah. The thousand year of training, the one who train is his soul not his body, so he is in process making his body powerful... basically he got the technique, the knowledge and only require time to apply its in real life...where when he is making tools to defend him self suddenly a random kiba appears. Regarding ignorance regarding devil...don't forget how devil is portrayed in FATE and how it's portrayed then you get why in his perception devil is automatically bad(more like bad and powerful) and Kiba's action is not helping. where Rias also have a part in this for not.

j_c77
j_c77Lv4j_c77

you're right but it was very rushed, so much drama, things got complicated very fast, It should have been done in a softer and less forceful way so that readers can digest and follow the rhythm of the novel ... Most of the readers read to relax or to escape from the cruel reality so it is not ideal to read a novel that in the first three chapters already gives you headaches. (It does not necessarily have to be a happy and relaxed novel, the important thing is that it is done in such a way that the reader can keep up, immerse themselves and endure important and unexpected changes)

HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON:Not defending the author but there is some misunderstanding in your comment. The problem one is basically he is at the wrong time and wrong place. Well some drama and misunderstanding is actually to spice up the stories...like without aspect like that the stories is bland. About perception about Rias... hmm she is not evil but her flaw is also there which although expressed to direct and a bit exaggerated, but still hit the spot. We are talking about the girl who know about each of her peerage problem yet choose to 'let time heal the wounds' even in original works, and the girl who knows her own predicament and choose to waste times for years...Years. not evil but yeah. The thousand year of training, the one who train is his soul not his body, so he is in process making his body powerful... basically he got the technique, the knowledge and only require time to apply its in real life...where when he is making tools to defend him self suddenly a random kiba appears. Regarding ignorance regarding devil...don't forget how devil is portrayed in FATE and how it's portrayed then you get why in his perception devil is automatically bad(more like bad and powerful) and Kiba's action is not helping. where Rias also have a part in this for not.
LiYao
LiYaoLv7LiYao

as you can see. he has demon/devil friends in the throne. it was mentioned there. and he was kinda prejudge on those on the throne because of the demon god pillars because they are evil and creepy well because they are pillar made of flesh. but overcome it by knowing them. their trueselves. just because of their species they were judged as evil and people didnt know them for who they are. there some species that we judge good but are doing more atrousious things than the evil ones. and staying there for six thousand years he learned the craft of the heroes there and he will use it to reach the root and become someone that will reach the throne of heroes that will make those friends/mentors proud.

KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4KING_IN_YELLOW

oh right he knows some devil but he still bias towards devil smh

LiYao:as you can see. he has demon/devil friends in the throne. it was mentioned there. and he was kinda prejudge on those on the throne because of the demon god pillars because they are evil and creepy well because they are pillar made of flesh. but overcome it by knowing them. their trueselves. just because of their species they were judged as evil and people didnt know them for who they are. there some species that we judge good but are doing more atrousious things than the evil ones. and staying there for six thousand years he learned the craft of the heroes there and he will use it to reach the root and become someone that will reach the throne of heroes that will make those friends/mentors proud.
schizocat
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I'm pretty sure it's natural that he would be biased. In fate, most beings with demonic energy were evil by nature. A normal person would think that demons are evil because that was how they were depicted. Even the majority of demon or something similar to them in the throne of heroes were evil in alignment. Like Mephisto for example, although he taught Soma, he was still evil.

LiYao:as you can see. he has demon/devil friends in the throne. it was mentioned there. and he was kinda prejudge on those on the throne because of the demon god pillars because they are evil and creepy well because they are pillar made of flesh. but overcome it by knowing them. their trueselves. just because of their species they were judged as evil and people didnt know them for who they are. there some species that we judge good but are doing more atrousious things than the evil ones. and staying there for six thousand years he learned the craft of the heroes there and he will use it to reach the root and become someone that will reach the throne of heroes that will make those friends/mentors proud.
DaoistFQsPhJ
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GUNSHOTTER
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HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON:Not defending the author but there is some misunderstanding in your comment. The problem one is basically he is at the wrong time and wrong place. Well some drama and misunderstanding is actually to spice up the stories...like without aspect like that the stories is bland. About perception about Rias... hmm she is not evil but her flaw is also there which although expressed to direct and a bit exaggerated, but still hit the spot. We are talking about the girl who know about each of her peerage problem yet choose to 'let time heal the wounds' even in original works, and the girl who knows her own predicament and choose to waste times for years...Years. not evil but yeah. The thousand year of training, the one who train is his soul not his body, so he is in process making his body powerful... basically he got the technique, the knowledge and only require time to apply its in real life...where when he is making tools to defend him self suddenly a random kiba appears. Regarding ignorance regarding devil...don't forget how devil is portrayed in FATE and how it's portrayed then you get why in his perception devil is automatically bad(more like bad and powerful) and Kiba's action is not helping. where Rias also have a part in this for not.
HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON
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Deathhorse
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You people do know therr exists a difference between a "Demon" and a "Devil" right? A Demon is a mindless flesh eating beast while A Devil is a cunning individual that makeses deals with humans. That's why it's said "Make a deal with the Devil" not the demon

Zetcoy
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snowflakes complaining about Asia's death and i'm like

j_c77
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oh ... congratulations, you are special.

Zetcoy:snowflakes complaining about Asia's death and i'm like
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Seikai
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Zetcoy:snowflakes complaining about Asia's death and i'm like
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aman10
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dude about rias point i think she deserve what she did in the anime also she is not evil but the superiority complex or spoileness is to much like she is the one who control type person that whe she deserved what's mc did

KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4KING_IN_YELLOW

he literally is in the thrones of heaven not in FATE so he interacts with the heroes themselves not just a small manifestation of them so thats invalid

HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON:Not defending the author but there is some misunderstanding in your comment. The problem one is basically he is at the wrong time and wrong place. Well some drama and misunderstanding is actually to spice up the stories...like without aspect like that the stories is bland. About perception about Rias... hmm she is not evil but her flaw is also there which although expressed to direct and a bit exaggerated, but still hit the spot. We are talking about the girl who know about each of her peerage problem yet choose to 'let time heal the wounds' even in original works, and the girl who knows her own predicament and choose to waste times for years...Years. not evil but yeah. The thousand year of training, the one who train is his soul not his body, so he is in process making his body powerful... basically he got the technique, the knowledge and only require time to apply its in real life...where when he is making tools to defend him self suddenly a random kiba appears. Regarding ignorance regarding devil...don't forget how devil is portrayed in FATE and how it's portrayed then you get why in his perception devil is automatically bad(more like bad and powerful) and Kiba's action is not helping. where Rias also have a part in this for not.
KING_IN_YELLOW
KING_IN_YELLOWLv4KING_IN_YELLOW

the guy really said that he has a friend who is a devil(demon) and most of them has reasons so why be bias?

schizocat:I'm pretty sure it's natural that he would be biased. In fate, most beings with demonic energy were evil by nature. A normal person would think that demons are evil because that was how they were depicted. Even the majority of demon or something similar to them in the throne of heroes were evil in alignment. Like Mephisto for example, although he taught Soma, he was still evil.
HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON
HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMONLv5HOLY_ANGELIC_DEMON

Don't ya mean throne of heroes? well no matter but inside it are people from Nasuverse which means including fate no?

KING_IN_YELLOW:he literally is in the thrones of heaven not in FATE so he interacts with the heroes themselves not just a small manifestation of them so thats invalid