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author, will you be elaborating on alex's life back on earth? i think that the betrayal of his bestfriend back on earth was not developed enough. (only mentioned here and there) hence, us readers could not really feel much about the reason he became the way he is. it would be nice if that part was spared a couple of chapters to explore so that you could give alex character depth just a little.
Death Guns In Another World
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thanks for responding! i hope to see more character interactions and development because that is where your novel and harem novels shine in general aside from the combat aspect. i'm really looking forward for the future chapters. ciao!
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