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Amazing fanfic, the narration is top-notch, and the way the characters are planned to grow is way up there compared to other fanfics out there. My only problem with this novel is that it is structured in a way that would have been perfect if it was an actual LIGHT NOVEL book, with lengthy chapters, and released per volumes. For a WEBNOVEL, however, the readers would have to stockpile chapters and read them in batches if they don't want to deal with constant cliff-hangers.
The Ancient Game
MightyWriter
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Thank you for your review, another viewer just commented something similar to you, and that to deal with the rather slow pace I write with, I would have to write either more lengthy chapters or simply increase the release rate. Since I am not willing to increase the pace of the novel because I feel a bit comfortable with the pace I currently have, I'll try to write more in the near future.
Just be careful not to burn yourself out, in fact, the problem might not be a big deal anymore once this novel reached hundred or so chapters. You have my support, this is the kind of quality fanfic that I'm looking for, but I'd rather deal with the slow pace than having this discontinued.
MightyWriter:Thank you for your review, another viewer just commented something similar to you, and that to deal with the rather slow pace I write with, I would have to write either more lengthy chapters or simply increase the release rate. Since I am not willing to increase the pace of the novel because I feel a bit comfortable with the pace I currently have, I'll try to write more in the near future.
In your novel can peaple tap out of the battle to live once they have defeated a number of peaple that way the mcs harem will be safe or they become part of his faction in a way later on when his faction wins the game only his faction is allowed to live and go Kinda get what I mean don’t want a hunger game type senario where you get to the end and have to kill your wifus
MightyWriter:Thank you for your review, another viewer just commented something similar to you, and that to deal with the rather slow pace I write with, I would have to write either more lengthy chapters or simply increase the release rate. Since I am not willing to increase the pace of the novel because I feel a bit comfortable with the pace I currently have, I'll try to write more in the near future.
You have to kill every participant to survive, but even if there are ways to travel with other people from the worlds each participant is going into, the people you bring with you are considered 'your abilities' so, for example, Deo won't have to kill his peerage.
CliffkunLolRekt:In your novel can peaple tap out of the battle to live once they have defeated a number of peaple that way the mcs harem will be safe or they become part of his faction in a way later on when his faction wins the game only his faction is allowed to live and go Kinda get what I mean don’t want a hunger game type senario where you get to the end and have to kill your wifus
Hmm ok what if he used a chess piece on another contestant wouldn’t that count as his own power 🤔 That’s just my what if brain going on lol
MightyWriter:You have to kill every participant to survive, but even if there are ways to travel with other people from the worlds each participant is going into, the people you bring with you are considered 'your abilities' so, for example, Deo won't have to kill his peerage.
CliffkunLolRekt:Hmm ok what if he used a chess piece on another contestant wouldn’t that count as his own power 🤔 That’s just my what if brain going on lol