Review Detail of Smiles in The Ancient Game

I'm 8 chapters in and hooked. The writing is better than many other stories I have read, not quite a professional level but closing in. I like the thought process of the author and the options that are shown. Like getting ride of world breakers at the start. I feel the time line is slightly off for where the main character currently is but that might just be because its been a while since I read high school dxd. Only thing I feel might be bad is that it seems that there are like 2 time skips in the first 8 chapters, and I don't think that you want to get into the habit of using them. If you do this story will end a bit short, try going to the other characters to develop them.