Review Detail of unknownblue in Harry Potter but AU???

I have read this story since it is only 40 pages and I am sorry for not reviewing sooner and more. This story goes from a rough diamond (even at the beginning it is good) and with time it grows to be better and better, right now I would say it is in my top 5 best reads in this website/app. The main character hovers around the lines of Realistic and fantasy perfectly as we can relate and emphasize with him along with other characters, yet he is better than the average joe making him something people see and put expectations on. The growth of the characters is also shown not just the main characters but also the love interests and friends, The author nicely put puns and motivating sentences as though it was a scheme for the chapter. all in all it is a great story to read, if the author ever make a book I will buy it