Review Detail of AntNumber4825 in Omega Summoner

The story isn’t bad. That is about the only good thing I can say. I read till chapter 81 to see if it was worth paying for and it is not. The best way to describe the writing is that it seems like you are reading the spark notes of the real story. Some parts even seem to be written by a 9 year old. For example one part the MC did something another character didn’t like and the exchange went like this. ”I don’t think he liked me doing that. The mage then said I don’t like that you did that.” This is by no means a criticism of the story, but a critique of the writing. If the you don’t mind a lack of personality in your characters and enjoy when stories jump around and don’t flow well they you might be able to enjoy this novel.