Review Detail of Michael_Slaton in Omega Summoner

Good story that provides lots of info and MC character development (real life and mmo char). Lots of long winded sentences grammar issues and repetitive information that ways up sizeable parts of a chapter. If you can deal with that it is becoming a good story. Main Character gets every ounce of good luck possible on everything which kinda gets silly. MC isn't very good at deducing clues for having natural talent for intelligence in real life.