Review Detail of RamdevGC in Our Best Time .. Can't Be Drawn Again?

The detail of your novel is spot on and the characters might need a little bit more description on what they're wearing or their face features and skin, also the setting might also need a little bit of description on what we are trying to imagine to see, but that's just me haha because I'm one of those specific kind of world builders if you've played DND with me you'll be immersed. Overall you are a hard working writer like I told you keep on writing and eventually you'll be in God level especially now you started young, just keep on writing up until 10 years I'll see you at the top of the authors castle.