Review Detail of Mquest in Reborn as Apollo (Mcu fanfiction )

Sup guys I'm gonna be be shameless and promote my own story. 😝 I hope you give the fanfiction a chance. I tried to make it interesting and hope to get some constructive feedback. Give comments if you have any interesting ideas you r willing to share or something you felt could be changed. Give me a fair rating, as thing is my first try at writing, I'm willing to listen to your suggestions on how I can improve.