A nice webnovel. Some grammar errors here and there and maybe a few weird punctuation signs. The story, although simple, is interesting enough but there are some pacing issues, sometimes it feels like the story is just being told rapidly, however there also is not much wait between the good parts. The characters are a bit of a mix, the latter chaps and characters are a bit better but, the group of friends in particular, dont really feel like they are different people with different personalities, they feel a bit like they are just an entity for the mc to talk with and have no purpose and goals of their own. The world is also a bit confusing but pretty interesting in setting, but the way the power is being told feels like it will end with a couple of wuxia novels errors in power creep and confusing power levels. Even though I pointed these errors, the story is pretty interesting and the mc is still likeable and the se scenes are still nice if a tad on the short side.
Sebastiean
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