Review Detail of Roosemary in True Assassin of Round Table
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Hello, Author here. Actually I don't want to write anything in the review column. However, I am forced to remind you, people who only want women, harem, lemons, sex, and so on. Sorry, this fanfic is not for you. I only warn you, that the main focus of this novel is the development of Camelot and its impact on the world of Overlord itself. Many people protested, why didn't I pair Esmeralda with Nash? it's because I don't want to, it's simple. Thank you for your attenttion.
True Assassin of Round Table
Roosemary
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Hello author-san, i completly agree with you, your ff is following the Spirit of the original overlord, where the main focus was toward the kingdom building, and you are doing It very well; the only thing i can think you should put in your novel is some romance, not very much because it isn't the focus of your novel, however romance is necessary for making the characters evolve also it would make everything more interesting. P.s. with some romance i don't mean that you have to create an Harem for Nash or something like that, of you want him to remain single than at least let the others characters fall in love, like for example lancelot and guinevre
Of course, it will not be the main focus, but romance is mandatory even in dark fantasy novels such as Overlord. Besides that I can also use romance as a way to make a character despair or happy. Therefore, there will be romance in this fanfic. Even Nash might move on from his love interest in Yggdrasil. ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
hidden_gate:Hello author-san, i completly agree with you, your ff is following the Spirit of the original overlord, where the main focus was toward the kingdom building, and you are doing It very well; the only thing i can think you should put in your novel is some romance, not very much because it isn't the focus of your novel, however romance is necessary for making the characters evolve also it would make everything more interesting. P.s. with some romance i don't mean that you have to create an Harem for Nash or something like that, of you want him to remain single than at least let the others characters fall in love, like for example lancelot and guinevre
I wonder why is this story posted as having a male protagonist while the story has a female protagonist you should fix that or am i missing something im at ch 7 and we only got pov from emeralda while that guy i dont even know his name only said like 5 words in the lst 8 chapters most of the time we getting the female and she is the leader so im guessing she is the protagonist why did you put the book as having a male protagonist??
Roosemary:Of course, it will not be the main focus, but romance is mandatory even in dark fantasy novels such as Overlord. Besides that I can also use romance as a way to make a character despair or happy. Therefore, there will be romance in this fanfic. Even Nash might move on from his love interest in Yggdrasil. ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
DarkKnight32:I wonder why is this story posted as having a male protagonist while the story has a female protagonist you should fix that or am i missing something im at ch 7 and we only got pov from emeralda while that guy i dont even know his name only said like 5 words in the lst 8 chapters most of the time we getting the female and she is the leader so im guessing she is the protagonist why did you put the book as having a male protagonist??
Heh, I did you just read up to what chapter? Have you ever read or watched the Overlord series? I want to make this fanfic have a resemblance to the original series, which tells the story from various points of view. Also, Nash is the MC in this story, you should read more chapter.
DarkKnight32:I wonder why is this story posted as having a male protagonist while the story has a female protagonist you should fix that or am i missing something im at ch 7 and we only got pov from emeralda while that guy i dont even know his name only said like 5 words in the lst 8 chapters most of the time we getting the female and she is the leader so im guessing she is the protagonist why did you put the book as having a male protagonist??