Review Detail of Supreme_Devil in True Assassin of Round Table
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Well its a good story. passable character development. A bit cliché world building but its ok. So why the review is only three stars?? Well its looks like the author has some cocking fetish. I mean seriously dude wtf. You do all this details sh*t by giving almost a perfect reason to the two Ocs to come together just to ruins it by putting the male oc with somebody else. Disappointing just disappointing.
True Assassin of Round Table
Roosemary
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hahaha yeah you even just read 5 chapters. But it can't be helped, it's your right to judge this novel. It seems like you misunderstood one thing here. I put two OCs (Nash and Esmeralda) in my story not as a couple. But as queen and knight, light and darkness. I hope you continue reading the next chapter.
I hope somehow you fix how you introduced your OCS, you make them look like they depend on each other too much to the point of growing some love interest between them, with the sad life the female oc lived and how she meet her 'other half' that is clearly far more miserable that her, so its pretty logical no almost irrefutable to not put them together, its like a mistake not doing that.
Roosemary:hahaha yeah you even just read 5 chapters. But it can't be helped, it's your right to judge this novel. It seems like you misunderstood one thing here. I put two OCs (Nash and Esmeralda) in my story not as a couple. But as queen and knight, light and darkness. I hope you continue reading the next chapter.
Well, I guess you should continue reading. I'm also confused, in which part do they imply that they like each other. Let me leak something, actually Nash has fond feelings for one of the other Five Pillars of the World, FireisHot. Nash considered Esmeralda only as a big brother, I also never wrote that they have mutual feelings. It seems like you read too many harem novels here, where all the girls introduced in detail are MC lovers. But I'm sorry, that is how I can tell a better story, because Esmeralda is also an MC here. And, if you feel that this fanfic is getting improvements in the future, please change the rating ok.
Supreme_Devil:I hope somehow you fix how you introduced your OCS, you make them look like they depend on each other too much to the point of growing some love interest between them, with the sad life the female oc lived and how she meet her 'other half' that is clearly far more miserable that her, so its pretty logical no almost irrefutable to not put them together, its like a mistake not doing that.
It's about a Queen and her Knight. Esmeralda was his Queen on the prior their roleplay in the game. Although a bit confusing why Arthur/Artoria not the ruler instead of her. Well, u see the 'Camelot' here, idk very much from which works. Although the Knight of Betrayal itself has similarity from Fate' work.
I actually realized why I don't like the beginning of the novel, if you watch this "Boku dake ga Inai Machi " you will know why.
Roosemary:Well, I guess you should continue reading. I'm also confused, in which part do they imply that they like each other. Let me leak something, actually Nash has fond feelings for one of the other Five Pillars of the World, FireisHot. Nash considered Esmeralda only as a big brother, I also never wrote that they have mutual feelings. It seems like you read too many harem novels here, where all the girls introduced in detail are MC lovers. But I'm sorry, that is how I can tell a better story, because Esmeralda is also an MC here. And, if you feel that this fanfic is getting improvements in the future, please change the rating ok.
Supreme_Devil:I actually realized why I don't like the beginning of the novel, if you watch this "Boku dake ga Inai Machi " you will know why.
Yes it was good, but the end was s*itty af, I mean the mc get Ntred but he acts cool about it, its cringy af.
Roosemary:Hahahaha, but that was pretty good anime.