The language and grammar are correct. The MC original in his own right, the reincarnation of a guy from a Toxic Forest. I also like the idea of a story fully focused on being an alchemist. And still... It wasn't enough. The story is focused, but it looks like all the events from canon about alchemy were taken, but without even a slight change. The author is describing them with his own words, but very rarely minor details change.
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