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It's alright for now but I wish the author would get a proofreader or something. Maybe they did later on in the story but early in, you can tell that the author struggles with details. A lot of details that are written in make absolutely zero sense, it might make sense to the author as they're the ones who wrote it but to the reader it is just nonsense. Definitely needs a lot of fixing up though I'm still early in the story.
The Magician of Sound
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On the bright side, this author actually has decent grammar. The last 2 novels I read are in the top voted spots but the grammar were all over the place. One of the novels literally had 100+ 'he' in each chapter. All I read was he did this, then he went off somewhere, he did that, he got this. He HE EHHEHEHE. Literally every sentence started with he or had he in it at least 2-3 times. Drove me mad reading that story. I always check later chapters to see if the authors improve, that one didn't. This one is a bit harder to do as it happens at times with poor descriptive paragraphs but not that often.