Review Detail of L00P3R in The Magician of Sound

Well, I did't have any expectations when I started reading this. Sure synopsis were interesting and first few chapters quickly got me hooked up but as I read through chapter after chapter I was totally confused characters were becoming dumber and dumber making ilogicall decisions plot holes were piling up to the enormous heights and then I realized it. This story was never what I thought it to be. Author had propabbly inspired himself by few popular novels and tried to recreat them at the beginning it worked quite well but when he tried to add his own thoughts he couldn't think of good way to proceed with his plot because of that it seems that characters are getting dumber, plot is forced everythings just falling apart. I apologize if I am mistaken for this but its just my opinion, also concept was quite interesting if author had some more experience or thinked it more throughtfully from the start, it wouldn't have to come to this disaster of story.