Review Detail of Melancholy_Daze in CRAVEN WORLD

I was very pleased with the writing quality, most fics have poor english and grammar mistakes so to see a trope that I'm fond of AND correct sounding English? I was stoked! As of right now, there's only one chapter so I can't truly rate the updating stability lol sorry. Also for only just one chapter, the story development was amazing. The character design and world background! Yessss. Just yes. Seriously, it's only one chapter and yet there's so much??? It's very in depth so far. I already have my favorite (cough Zuuei cough). So overall, I'm very pleased and happy! Please continue with your work, thank you!