Review Detail of firiewww in Mine is the Kingdom

This is not normally a type of novel I read frequently, but honestly it got me hooked up that I found myself stopping chapter 12 for a break, the developments are good, some can be confusing but its a minor issue. I think its a good read, especially for the audience it is geared for. And yeah, some grammatical errors, better be fixed on the earlier chapters, so the unfolding of the events doesn't get ruined by a single confusing word. Overall a good read!