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LunaW0lf
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I like this so far, keep up the good work. You should add more details about the world, like maybe what's the goal of the world or something. Idk, just add more details about the world.

The Overpowered Mage: A New Age Of Magic (Contest version)

IceValkyrie

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Thank you!! Stick around for more! I'll try to add a goal thanks for the feedback :)