Review Detail of marblefox59 in Alphas Little Mate

I did get lost in the transition from chapter 1 to chapter 2. I also read up to the most recently updated chapter, and it’s an interesting read with how the characters are set up. I think this book can lead to something interesting, but needs a little tweaking. It does feel a bit rushed and grammar/spelling mistakes occur often. I am curious about what the author has in store for the MC; however, I think the story needs a little bit more development in the timeliness of events. Some steppingstones should take longer to get to because of previous events in the MC’s history.