Review Detail of Virgin_Loli in Black Onyx - Forgotten Magic

I'm disappointed. I thought this was a story about secrets with a deep magical system, but after 85 chapters, nothing special has happened, except that the author constantly puts a stick in the wheels of the main character. First, by adding a useless female character that created a lot of problems for the main character, then I introduced nanites that should help, but instead only harm by interfering with the effects of really useful potions, I do not know what will happen next but at the moment I can't imagine how else the author can ruin the life of the main character except by crippling him completely and leaving him to die in some roadside ditch arriving in the abyss of despair and suffering Writing Quality: 5/5 Updating Stability: 5/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 3/5 World Background: 4/5