Review Detail of RandomName368 in Black Onyx - Forgotten Magic

The start was a bit weak but it gets better as the story develops. The writing is a little bit clunky at times and there are a few typos but not too many. The world and the magic systems are interesting, but I kinda find it hard to believe that nobody would figure out some of the more basic stuff the MC did. The characters could be a bit more fleshed out, none of them besides the main character are developed and a lot of the time just feel like NPCs. They don't really have any defined goals or motivations. Overall its a fun read watching the protagonist slowly grow and face struggles, but don't go in expecting some deep plot. Oh, I almost forgot, Mister/Master G best girl, fight me.