The story and characters are overall very good. I like the chemistry between the male and female lead also. The grammar is decent too so no issues with that. My biggest peeve about this story is that the author has a hard time differentiating between male & female characters. A lot of time the male characters are addressed as "she" & "her" making it super hard to understand which character in each scene is doing or saying what. So, I often have to re-read pages just to keep things straight. It's kind of annoying.
Nannan Li
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