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jeanpierregerardo
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I just say that I like where this is going. ------------------------ some ideas of mine: - When Natsu becomes a master of "fairy tail", as long as it is, make your mentality better, do not act by instinct, once the others return, have a surprise to see how the guild has progressed, and more When they see who the teacher is and how he has changed his attitude from carefree to serious, I believe with that, Erza will take interest. --------------------- You also have to be stronger, to give him a good fight "Gildars" when he returns, and you will know what else to do. --------------------- publish more chapters, your fanfic is interesting.

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Fairy Tail: The Fourth Master

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I_Stole_Your_Soul
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Could be dead…………………….

jeanpierregerardo
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Do not forget to improve the relationship of the protagonist with the princess. ----------------------- and let the fear for erza, if you want to progress in the relationship xD.

ImmortalCupCake
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Thanks for the support, I'll do my best!

PrimordialDemon
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Update? 🥺😥😭

ImmortalCupCake:Thanks for the support, I'll do my best!
ArchaniD
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hey man ... you drop this masterpiece for good?

ImmortalCupCake:Thanks for the support, I'll do my best!