so im gunna say this story has a rough start first 40 chapters are basically used as building blocks so it is really slow after that it starts to pick up some Grammer and the way some things are said or described are a little annoying however this does not effect the quality of the story its very good if you can get through to 50 chapters at the least if you are gunna give it a try
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