Review Detail of hassekf in The Mysterious Black Magician

Interesting, good background and has lots of potential, but the author is still in his infancy when it comes to writing. Info dump everywhere, description of important events are ignored, characters are the most fake I have ever seen. Forced bullying, forced situations, no credibility at all. The Mc is dumb, ignorant of his own powers and is a suckrr for girls. Even the good old cliches are badly done here. The grammar and English of this, is almost umbereable. Needs some seeeerious editing to become readable. But again, is has potential, but the author seems to never have read a good written novel before. Maybe in the hands of a different writer, this can be a good gem. At last, good luck author. Hope you become a hellaof writer and comes back to redo this one. Good luck.