Review Detail of Sevennamed in RWBY: the fallen one

Four things wrong with this story: 1st: In the Devil's Society being someone else's servant would mostly nullify his engagement to Sona (the Shinto gods would likely not allow their chief goddess to be betrothed to the servant of a devil), unless it was to her parents or older sister. 2nd: She could not have him join here peerage, the King must be stronger than the person they reincarnate. Also the Evil Peices should not be able to overwrite a more powerful bloodline. 3rd: It makes no sense that a Knight Piece would be able to upgrade his Sacred Gear. 4th: The mc has lost all of his cool points, and has become a bi**h of the system and a spoiled, lazy devil princess.