I have read the first chapter and the imagination is quite vivid. I can picture the story unfolding before my eyes. The writing quality is good, Stability of updates is equally good. The story is developing well. Character design is very good and will become even more as the story progresses. At present there are only two three characters including the red eyed thing. World background is well described. I am saving your novel to my library to read later. All the best for your success.
Lamorakon_G
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