Review Detail of That1Otaku in I transmigrated to a mafia character from a BL Dark novel!

The story has an interesting plot and the characters so far have been unique. The main issue I have is how the author writes. There's too much explaing of tiny insignificant details and not enough explaining of what the characters are doing. An example would be let's say the main character walking down a hallway and then looks outside a window which would led into a detailed explanation of the architecture of the building. You get what I mean. I as a reader isn't interested in that I would rather know whats going to happen when the mc get to his destination. My advice is to focus on one topic while sprinkling some SIGNIFICANT details that is useful and or will come up later. Besides this I think the story has potentially and will be waiting for more chapters😗.