Review Detail of Drowseh in Re: Level 100 Farmer
Review detail
A well written story that has fantastic world build and amazing characters you can really connect with. Definitely has a lot of similarities to Overlord so if you read that novel and loved it like I did then this is a MUST read. Although the title might be somewhat off putting at first, there is a lot more that this novel has to offer. Writing quality is fantastic and is really easy to read and process, and the character development is fantastic. There are some portions of the story that could be explained a bit better and are downright confusing, however these instances are like needles in a haystack and don’t affect the story all that much. Overall, I’m currently thoroughly enjoying this amazing story. Cant wait for more :D
Re: Level 100 Farmer
John_Doever
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Sure, one part I was very confused on is when Li was trying to think up a plan on how to rescue the adventures from his ant that he created. He previously says something along the lines of “if I stop him(the ant) then the knights and adventurers will know that theres a threat strong enough to control a level 60 monster” so his solution is to turn into his human form and then summon the ant. I was confused as to why his form made such a difference to the point where the knights and adventurers didnt even question his methods of taming this level 60 monster beyond “beast taming”. Like Im pretty sure they would want a better explanation than that as well as take a more fearful approach when addressing him. If he can control a monster that can wipe out some of the bests warriors they can offer, how can they take him so lightly?
John_Doever:Thanks for the review, if you can, I'd love it if you could point out areas you thought were confusing. I'm going to go through and do a mass revision of everything I've written, and I want to make sure the reading experience is perfect for you!
Thanks a lot for that, I'll definitely be revising that chapter. Sometimes I do rush things out and as a result certain events don't seem to be supported as much, so it's awesome that you can direct me to really specific instances to fix.
Drowseh:Sure, one part I was very confused on is when Li was trying to think up a plan on how to rescue the adventures from his ant that he created. He previously says something along the lines of “if I stop him(the ant) then the knights and adventurers will know that theres a threat strong enough to control a level 60 monster” so his solution is to turn into his human form and then summon the ant. I was confused as to why his form made such a difference to the point where the knights and adventurers didnt even question his methods of taming this level 60 monster beyond “beast taming”. Like Im pretty sure they would want a better explanation than that as well as take a more fearful approach when addressing him. If he can control a monster that can wipe out some of the bests warriors they can offer, how can they take him so lightly?