Review Detail of Henrion in The Last Slytherin

Overall, this novel is very well done. I've got one complaint though. The development is terrible. The progression is way too fast. There are 74 chapters so far and he's already on year 4. The novel isn't gonna last long if the Author doesn't have a plan for after the protagonist leaves Hogwarts. At several points in the story, the author rushes and the quality gets very sloppy. Sometimes event's that weren't previously mentioned will be brought up and confuse the readers. Then in a later chapter it'll be explained with a flashback. Honestly, it's a great story, but with how jumpy the plot is, a rewrite might not be a bad idea.