Review Detail of Broxhitman1998 in One Piece: Reincarnation (HIATUS~~~)

It is really challenging to read. The sentence are stuck one after another which makes it hard for me to read. I had to take a pause after every long paragraph as it hurt my eyes. The story itself is good but I can’t see the difference between a reincarnated Luffy who has foreknowledge and a 100+ Mc who should have a different character. He talks like Luffy he laughs like Luffy and he does most what the canon part would do. Sure I am still at the beginning so my opinion could change but I read a lot of other fanfictions such as this and some did better on things like personality. Then there is my concerns with his strength growth. If this story will continue like canon then I see no point in making him so strong as there will be no point in reading the fights as the outcome is clear which is a big problem with OP Mc’s. In one paragraph I commented about the problems and I will see how the author is going to handle it. All in all it is a good FanFiction which needs some fine-tuning and a clear rout of how he will change the future of One Piece because if it stays like canon then you can watch canon.