Review Detail of Tonyorobsky in Reincarnated As An OP Paladin
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The protagonist is dull, the fight scenes are dull, poor choice of summoning location, the system fight for him, which is way too cheap, super companions gained too easily too fast... So, the problems are character design and story development.
Reincarnated As An OP Paladin
CautiousTitan
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Thanks For The Feedback! The story should improve as we move forward. Especially Character Design and Story Development once we reach the first settlement. This is also my first novel so the story should improve as I gain more advice. This is more of a comedic take but some of the points mentioned can still be improved upon. Thanks.
I too was a 1st time writer. I couldn’t write proper dialogues on my first fiction for the 1st 10-15 chapters. I also had focused a lot on the protagonist so he would be well fleshed, but that made the other characters lacking until I made a few chapters in their POV and made more interactions with the mc.
CautiousTitan:Thanks For The Feedback! The story should improve as we move forward. Especially Character Design and Story Development once we reach the first settlement. This is also my first novel so the story should improve as I gain more advice. This is more of a comedic take but some of the points mentioned can still be improved upon. Thanks.
Yeah. I'm trying to learn more about storytelling on the days that I edit so the story gets better with time. I didn't expect my first novel to be trending so I'm having to learn important concepts quicker than I would like. Glad people like the story despite my beginner-like mistakes
Tonyorobsky:I too was a 1st time writer. I couldn’t write proper dialogues on my first fiction for the 1st 10-15 chapters. I also had focused a lot on the protagonist so he would be well fleshed, but that made the other characters lacking until I made a few chapters in their POV and made more interactions with the mc.