Review Detail of Lasyandra in WORLD TRAVELER

Story is good. I'm serious here.. Not even once I'm cursing while reading this story. You know what that's mean? It's mean your story is good. There's many stories that makes me cursing because how bad or annoying it is, but yours not. Well for now, I don't know about the future.. alright, well.. I like his personality.. well maybe not that much.. I quite like his power.. and etc.. BUT you just got 4.8⭐ because of grammar! Well that's it.. continue your work.. I hope your writing quality become better in the future~