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Review Detail of PhalconX in Master of the End Times

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PhalconX
PhalconXLv63yrPhalconX

After reading all 60 chapters I believe this novel shows much more promise than some other trash that is here on trial read. The story development and character of the MC are enjoyable as he doesn't bullshiit around most of the time and kills the enemy. The only things holding this story back are the poor translation quality(grammatical mistakes and stuff) and the fact that the power system has not been explained at all and you'll have to guess it as you read. It's not too hard to understand the power structure but it would've been nice if a glossary was added for explanation. The timeline might get messed up a couple times but that comes under poor translation quality. All in all, the story so far has been good, as I said much better than some other cliché trash on trial read. Of course since it's a reincarnation novel there'll be some cliché but it's not that bad and you can look past it easily

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Master of the End Times

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The_Good_Devil
The_Good_DevilLv5The_Good_Devil

under my experience. when author doesn't explain power structure, than that mean he have confidence in his work and will explain it in the future, like The Great Mechanic where author explained the world structure at chapter 600 something.

PhalconX
PhalconXLv6PhalconX

The power structure isn't that hard to understand either. It's just that I thought it would be good to add it into the review.

The_Good_Devil:under my experience. when author doesn't explain power structure, than that mean he have confidence in his work and will explain it in the future, like The Great Mechanic where author explained the world structure at chapter 600 something.
PhalconX
PhalconXLv6PhalconX

The power structure isn't that hard to understand either. It's just that I thought it would be good to add it into the review.

The_Good_Devil:under my experience. when author doesn't explain power structure, than that mean he have confidence in his work and will explain it in the future, like The Great Mechanic where author explained the world structure at chapter 600 something.