Review Detail of Vinayak_ in Master of the End Times

so much okay. not to mention that I hate that the authors always forget the butterfly effect: if you recover a super soldier before his growth ... well he will no longer be a super soldier! I put this comment here, but it can be generalized full of books (Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God ...) too often authors forget that what made them what they will be may NOT have happened yet!

If these coincidences don't happen then what's the difference between MC and passerby A and passerby B? When you write a story, obviously all the incidents in the world are going to revolve around the main character. This is the underdog reaching the pinnacle of the world type of story.

Chalk everything up to *talent*..... SIGHS

The sheer quantity of these coincidences will make you question if MC has some luck skill. This is a reincarnation novel: a novel in which MC very intelligently uses the data he knows to build a better tomorrow. None of the things above were planned other than the cultivation skill. None of them. A freaking meteor worth of hellstone (I forgot the actual name cuz it's been so long) falls literally in front of the MC when a finger length resulted in a city being destroyed in the ensuing fight makes you question these mere coincidences. Author is basically feeding MC with a silver spoon. I accept one or two things happening due to luck and termed as coincidences but so many ? It's no more luck and is basically spoon feeding and wish fulfilling.

Certain events happen that the MC only knows some minor facts about and only goes there to fish for opportunities. The whole butterfly effect is mentioned a lot the farther you go in the story. Though it is petty that the author made three different versions of this. One is the best and is more then 1000+ chapters, but as far as I can tell was either discontinued or lost in myriad webhosts. The next best is 1100+ chapters, but is just "ehh!" ending wise. The last one is the one on qidian which 500 something and cuts out most of the good stuff in the later half. I'm guessing the author gave up the rewrite and settled for the short version after the back issue she had. She stopped writing her new book and said she couldn't write anymore because of back pain and might not continue in the future.

Could you tell me if this is a harem? (Because I can't stand it.)

The butterfly effect is real no doubt, but that doesn't mean that if a soldier was an s rank in the future then in the past certain things changed he or she won't b an s rank again? All it means Is a different route was taken either can b disastrous or super enriching... So the conclusion is the person is going to b an s rank either super slow or fast.

The butterfly effect is real no doubt, but that doesn't mean that if a soldier was an s rank in the future then in the past certain things changed he or she won't b an s rank again? All it means Is a different route was taken either can b disastrous or super enriching... So the conclusion is the person is going to b an s rank either super slow or fast.

actually this will depende if we say its because that soldier is really yalented then sure hell still be S rank but what if he doesnt have as much drive to train compared to when that soldier was in the future when didnt meet mc or maybe instead of talent he ended up finding something that got him to S rank talent but since he met MC might not get that chance so u cant say that theyll be 100% sure they will be S rank again

This was an amazing read.

I hate butterfly effect. and if butterfly effect destroy all hard work of MC then that novel I loss interest like ascender rift I stop reading because excessive useless butterfly effect.

10 out of 10

Very accurate review

a nadie excepto a ti le importa esas vainas men, si fuera el caso los autores tendrian que ser un jodido cientifico o algo mas para rellenar todo ese tipo de detalles, incluso la trama se veria afectada , no te pases de pendejo

the story focuses quite a bit on the idea that those who are naturally talented and work hard will become strong. I think the presumption in this story then is that these powerful people he finds early on are naturally talented. also *SPOILER * the merchant he recruits doesn't become as powerful as he was previously for a very long time since his new circumstances don't require it.

Although I agree with your points but this is still a good story. It is one of the only few stories i have 'Finished' and let me tell you, I've finished less than 10 books. Although me finishing it cannot really define anything since I finished it when i just started reading and I'm sure that if i start reading it now i will drop it 95%. So in my opinion its a good novel for Beginner readers as one of the first choices to read. And another plus i wanted to give was that it had a satisfactory ending (at least for me), whereas a lot of good novels end up getting too rushed during the end or the quality really drops near the end (mostly due to authors having used up all that creativity juice in their brains)