Review Detail of Tempo_Aleatorio in Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?

this is a really good story, but it has some aspects that don't make it one of the best. sometimes the characters' lines seem very strange and give a slight feeling of discomfort, despite that the way some of the lines in the game are used is a really good catch. most of the time I don't really like when another protagonist takes the place of the main protagonist, not that it's poorly done but the way the story goes when I see the protagonist stealing (for lack of a better word) certain relationships and really important things gives me a bad feeling in the end. this is a great read that is definitely worth reading, the way i sometimes find myself imagining and thinking how else the world of dark Souls could be integrated and just amazing, no story is really perfect because it won't always totally fit. because of the difference in experiences between the author and the reader, but this one had little discomfort in me and I can say that it is a worthwhile reading ( Google translator)