Review Detail of a_commoner in The Ancient Genes
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Simply put the MC doesn't deserve to be an MC, he's just flowing with the waves, he's retarded character carried by plot armors. He has no redeeming quality author than retarded righteousness which is somehow ok, since he's young, but other than that he's nothing. And there's loopholes in the story as well concerning his parents.
The Ancient Genes
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Chapter 33, which isn't a little for me. First of all he's introduced as the son of some legendary parents and a prestigious family but he soon became like an nobody with no background. He was almost assassinated but he and his parent acted as if nothing happened an continued with their lives. A god gave him a chance to became strong but all we got is a snotty ungrateful brat which isn't funny. The first time he acted in the story is when he became an adventurer or something but the first quest he took is investigation like that some easy job. Let's not talk about that boring shonen setting in the school with his forced roommates and 4 tyrants and some annoying goddesses. What broke the back of the camel for me though was the lazy writing, ok he took the quest, at least make some effort to make him somehow get some clues, what we got instead is the guy put him in some random deserted place and it just turned out to be the place where the hostages are, come on, please!
Nizar_Abdennour:Wich chapter did you reach before writing this my dude? probably not past 100
I would have to agree with you that the early chapters we're not that good but it does get better after that, and I can garenty that you will enjoy the ride
a_commoner:Chapter 33, which isn't a little for me. First of all he's introduced as the son of some legendary parents and a prestigious family but he soon became like an nobody with no background. He was almost assassinated but he and his parent acted as if nothing happened an continued with their lives. A god gave him a chance to became strong but all we got is a snotty ungrateful brat which isn't funny. The first time he acted in the story is when he became an adventurer or something but the first quest he took is investigation like that some easy job. Let's not talk about that boring shonen setting in the school with his forced roommates and 4 tyrants and some annoying goddesses. What broke the back of the camel for me though was the lazy writing, ok he took the quest, at least make some effort to make him somehow get some clues, what we got instead is the guy put him in some random deserted place and it just turned out to be the place where the hostages are, come on, please!