The story could of been interesting in all honesty. But there are many pointless aspects or beguiling points. My biggest concern is the mc's mentality, his parents are at the peak of the world but the mc has no standard. His behaviour is erratic and childish. He lacks and backbone even when opening the headmaster's office door he started stuttering and shaking. You would think the author would of considered writing based on the mc's background he would of met strong people most of his life due to his parents. The mc decided his parents were gone for abit so author decided hey lets make him join a school (cliche) and let him join the dorm of horrible people (cliche) and let his first friend be a fatty perv (cliche x2) Oops forgot let him learn blacksmithing and astonish teacher (cliche) Let him get a super awesome heirloom with no owner for generations (cliche) What else... Let his sister be op and him bad (cliche) His new school has 4 big bad bosses (cliche) Okay so you get my point. This is at chapter 9 or 10 in the novel.. im giving up, there's nothing that i havent read so far but atleast they were well written cliches. The author is still learning here and it isn't worth it for me to stick around while author fiddles. Also biggest turn off is authors weird method of changing povs to characters through chapters.
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LIKEIm on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)
I_Sleep_Late:Im on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)
Read Reverend Insanity and u can tell me any of cliches u can find, read carefree path of dreams, read Warlock of the magus world, and read my journey to godhood as a caterpillar.
DreamzWork:so can you recommend me novel that don't have "cliche" or at least 4 to 5 cliches?
DreamzWork:so can you recommend me novel that don't have "cliche" or at least 4 to 5 cliches?
Daoistgpr8D3:darling go and watch supreme magus, the beginning after the end, trash of count
DreamzWork:I already read them just w8 thing for updates. well I expecting of hidden gem😉
The biggest problem for me is the 8th grade syndrome comedy it has going on in it chapter after chapter after chapter... On top of this if he is supposed to be going to school to become a blacksmith then why hasn't the author written about the blacksmithing stuff and just jumps into a random adventure before even establishing his life as a blacksmith in training in the new school?
all are great works, tbate is the best novel written so far, you won't find anything better, unless you're a fan of clichéd works besides the ground leveling plot point
Daoistgpr8D3:darling go and watch supreme magus, the beginning after the end, trash of count
I_Sleep_Late:Im on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)
Reincarnated With the Strongest System. The MC William is not a simp and doesn't start off strong. Still ongoing with 400+ chp atm.
DreamzWork:so can you recommend me novel that don't have "cliche" or at least 4 to 5 cliches?
Llama_92:Reincarnated With the Strongest System. The MC William is not a simp and doesn't start off strong. Still ongoing with 400+ chp atm.
DreamzWork:I already read them just w8 thing for updates. well I expecting of hidden gem😉
Thank you for saving some of us some time. I got recommended this book during one of the events and just barely made it to 40.
I_Sleep_Late:Im on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)
Oh yeah the beginning after the end rocks it also has a manga, another one is solo leveling, omniscient reader's viewpoint etc.
Daoistgpr8D3:darling go and watch supreme magus, the beginning after the end, trash of count
Kittylovely:Oh yeah the beginning after the end rocks it also has a manga, another one is solo leveling, omniscient reader's viewpoint etc.