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Review Detail of Reached_The_Apex_ in The Ancient Genes

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Reached_The_Apex_
Reached_The_Apex_Lv103yrReached_The_Apex_

The story could of been interesting in all honesty. But there are many pointless aspects or beguiling points. My biggest concern is the mc's mentality, his parents are at the peak of the world but the mc has no standard. His behaviour is erratic and childish. He lacks and backbone even when opening the headmaster's office door he started stuttering and shaking. You would think the author would of considered writing based on the mc's background he would of met strong people most of his life due to his parents. The mc decided his parents were gone for abit so author decided hey lets make him join a school (cliche) and let him join the dorm of horrible people (cliche) and let his first friend be a fatty perv (cliche x2) Oops forgot let him learn blacksmithing and astonish teacher (cliche) Let him get a super awesome heirloom with no owner for generations (cliche) What else... Let his sister be op and him bad (cliche) His new school has 4 big bad bosses (cliche) Okay so you get my point. This is at chapter 9 or 10 in the novel.. im giving up, there's nothing that i havent read so far but atleast they were well written cliches. The author is still learning here and it isn't worth it for me to stick around while author fiddles. Also biggest turn off is authors weird method of changing povs to characters through chapters.

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The Ancient Genes

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ReincarnatedSaint
ReincarnatedSaintAuthorReincarnatedSaint

The things u have mentioned all stem from early chapters. I haven't got time to edit those. But if you read up to 50, you would have a bit different opinion. Thnx for reading

I_Sleep_Late
I_Sleep_LateLv11I_Sleep_Late

Im on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)

DreamzWork
DreamzWorkLv4DreamzWork

so can you recommend me novel that don't have "cliche" or at least 4 to 5 cliches?

Tyyx_4u
Tyyx_4uLv1Tyyx_4u

Ty

I_Sleep_Late:Im on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)
Conquerer007
Conquerer007Lv2Conquerer007

Read Reverend Insanity and u can tell me any of cliches u can find, read carefree path of dreams, read Warlock of the magus world, and read my journey to godhood as a caterpillar.

DreamzWork:so can you recommend me novel that don't have "cliche" or at least 4 to 5 cliches?
CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2CriticalReader

interesting, because its one of the very novels on this sites with povs but yeah seeing the same tropes too many times can get on your nerves irregardless of well executed they are

Daoistgpr8D3
Daoistgpr8D3Lv12Daoistgpr8D3

darling go and watch supreme magus, the beginning after the end, trash of count

DreamzWork:so can you recommend me novel that don't have "cliche" or at least 4 to 5 cliches?
DreamzWork
DreamzWorkLv4DreamzWork

I already read them just w8 thing for updates. well I expecting of hidden gem😉

Daoistgpr8D3:darling go and watch supreme magus, the beginning after the end, trash of count
MrHerrax
MrHerraxLv1MrHerrax

New age of summoners

DreamzWork:I already read them just w8 thing for updates. well I expecting of hidden gem😉
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5SorcererCat

The biggest problem for me is the 8th grade syndrome comedy it has going on in it chapter after chapter after chapter... On top of this if he is supposed to be going to school to become a blacksmith then why hasn't the author written about the blacksmithing stuff and just jumps into a random adventure before even establishing his life as a blacksmith in training in the new school?

Mysteries_
Mysteries_Lv11Mysteries_

all are great works, tbate is the best novel written so far, you won't find anything better, unless you're a fan of clichéd works besides the ground leveling plot point

Daoistgpr8D3:darling go and watch supreme magus, the beginning after the end, trash of count
Aaron_Cruz_2802
Aaron_Cruz_2802Lv11Aaron_Cruz_2802

save my time ty

I_Sleep_Late:Im on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)
Llama_92
Llama_92Lv13Llama_92

Reincarnated With the Strongest System. The MC William is not a simp and doesn't start off strong. Still ongoing with 400+ chp atm.

DreamzWork:so can you recommend me novel that don't have "cliche" or at least 4 to 5 cliches?
DaoisthFuvlJ
DaoisthFuvlJLv1DaoisthFuvlJ

read paragon of sins..one of the best novel i've read

VTuber_Simp_Killer
VTuber_Simp_KillerLv1VTuber_Simp_Killer

I dropped it after the whole still a slave part which is not much better versus a simp.

Llama_92:Reincarnated With the Strongest System. The MC William is not a simp and doesn't start off strong. Still ongoing with 400+ chp atm.
Dreygar
DreygarLv5Dreygar

We all are ... We all are seeking moree like the sin of gluttony... nothing is enough!!!

DreamzWork:I already read them just w8 thing for updates. well I expecting of hidden gem😉
Arkasia_Winters
Arkasia_WintersLv15Arkasia_Winters

Thank you for saving some of us some time. I got recommended this book during one of the events and just barely made it to 40.

I_Sleep_Late:Im on chapter 120. The cliches you are saying are really sticking out. Dont believe what this guy said that its okay after 50. This thing is lacking originality. Enemies approach MC because of a campus beauty (cliche) MC beats up Enemies but he gets suspended instead (cliche) There is a school camping event and the school administration did not have security so the students will have to defend for themselves so many students will die (cliche) The instructors are pieces of sh*t and rely on the students during horde attack (cliche) Enemies eat a demonic pill to power up like 10 times without any reperrcusions (irrational cliche bevause of author's laziness in rationally giving the story a rationalization)
Kittylovely
KittylovelyLv3Kittylovely

Oh yeah the beginning after the end rocks it also has a manga, another one is solo leveling, omniscient reader's viewpoint etc.

Daoistgpr8D3:darling go and watch supreme magus, the beginning after the end, trash of count
ar_In
ar_InLv2ar_In

shadow slave, supremacy games

Kittylovely:Oh yeah the beginning after the end rocks it also has a manga, another one is solo leveling, omniscient reader's viewpoint etc.