The story is good but sometimes I can't understand who is talking if the author can fix that It will be a 5 for me.
ReincarnatedSaint
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LIKEReincarnatedSaint:I have tried litrpg style. So usually, the MC will be speaking unless any other is mentioned. Thanks for mentioning it. I will try to clear it
Please edit. There are double words, and punctuation is disturbing (dropped at half of chapter 1)...
ReincarnatedSaint:I have tried litrpg style. So usually, the MC will be speaking unless any other is mentioned. Thanks for mentioning it. I will try to clear it
I know. It was my first time writing. But it later on improves. Regarding editing. The moment I find free time, I will do it
Crycks:Please edit. There are double words, and punctuation is disturbing (dropped at half of chapter 1)...