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XxEagleNightxX
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The story is good but sometimes I can't understand who is talking if the author can fix that It will be a 5 for me.

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The Ancient Genes

ReincarnatedSaint

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ReincarnatedSaint
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I have tried litrpg style. So usually, the MC will be speaking unless any other is mentioned. Thanks for mentioning it. I will try to clear it

21man
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I start this because I see you comment on the other novel

ReincarnatedSaint:I have tried litrpg style. So usually, the MC will be speaking unless any other is mentioned. Thanks for mentioning it. I will try to clear it
adeksjosh20
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Really Nice

adeksjosh20
adeksjosh20Lv3adeksjosh20

Really Nice

Crycks
CrycksLv14Crycks

Please edit. There are double words, and punctuation is disturbing (dropped at half of chapter 1)...

ReincarnatedSaint:I have tried litrpg style. So usually, the MC will be speaking unless any other is mentioned. Thanks for mentioning it. I will try to clear it
ReincarnatedSaint
ReincarnatedSaintAuthorReincarnatedSaint

I know. It was my first time writing. But it later on improves. Regarding editing. The moment I find free time, I will do it

Crycks:Please edit. There are double words, and punctuation is disturbing (dropped at half of chapter 1)...