Review Detail of slin0110 in The Morning Star 1

Overall comment: The novel seems promising and it’s pretty good for a first time writer, I’ll detail the improvements I think the author could make below Writing quality Pretty decent writing quality, perhaps not always the best choice of words , but it’s still readable. Updating stability I personally think the updates are pretty good, especially if it’s a first attempt at writing. There has been always at least one chapter a day, and even though the author updates without editing the chapters (sometimes not finishing writing the chapters), there’s always something for readers to read. Story development Everything has been going a bit slow, and I’m still confused as to how some things connect, but it’s only the beginning of the novel, and I’m sure the author will add and edit more details along the way. Character Design The main character is quite likeable at this point, there seems to be a lot readers can relate to her about. I’m hoping for the characters’ personalities to be shown more as the novel progresses. World background The author has incorporated the world background into one of her chapters so far, and the concept is quite good- only that the chapter isn’t finished yet (so far)